Editing

We are currently editing our trailer, and we were showing it to some friends to get their honest opinion on whether the trailer is telling the story. A few people didn't quite understand what was going on. They also said that our CCTV camera shot was defiantly a good idea, and a few of the people we showed it too compared it to Paranormal Activity. Both I and Scarlett decided we should make it seem like more of a homemade/ handheld camera movie, this would mean we would be able to explain the film plot more in the trailer without dumbing down the audience. We are planning to get some more CCTV camera shots and I personally feel that this will help tell the narrative of the trailer better. In the mean time I will be researching into the Paranormal Activity and looking at the poster and film trailer. Also to see how they have been able to make the storyline of the film clear in the trailer.
Louise