Dates Added

Me and Scarlett found that people didn't quite understand the time laps in our film trailer, we then thought that if we added two separate dates to show that the murder of the seven school children was in November 2001 and that the caretaker comes back in January 2011. We also found that some people didn't understand that the caretaker killed the students earlier and then he escapes form jail. I feel as though the dates that we have added make the trailer seem more understandable. The dates have gave more of an idea about what is going on and that the trailer is spilt into two different time periods.
Louise