''One caretaker..
A school full of children..
His plan to kill..''
This is currently what the opening sentence of our trailer says, at first it said something along the lines of:
''Would you like the caretaker of your school to be planning to kill you''
I felt as thought we needed something short, snappy and something that gives the narrative within a few words. I have changed this on the trailer to see which one flows better and I have discovered that the second piece of texts works better.
Louise
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